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18 August 2008 @ 09:48 am
Fic: Eclipse (10/?)  
Title: Eclipse
Rating: R
Pairing: Ten/Donna (Friendship, UST)
Word Count: 1,026
Summary: Donna feels like there’s something she’s missing. Spoilers for Doctor Who 4.13 - Journey’s End.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot. Story title inspired by The Frames.
Author’s Notes: Again - a post earlier than intended; but I had a lovely weekend away, which put me in a fabulous mood, and got me (at least tentatively) over my bit of writer’s block (perhaps driving across borders that you didn’t mean to is good for the muse? Because I crossed two borders, four times total, and only half of them were intentional.) And, more pressingly, I am posting in a shameless attempt to bribe [info]dana_cz into posting the next part of her latest amazing story Unexpected; I hope it works! Anyway - in reference to the chapter itself - FORESHADOWING like woah; and if/when you spot it, let me know what you think of it? Enjoy :)


Part One: Eulalie
Part Two: Desperate Moments In Linear Time
Part Three: Ontological Subjectivity
Part Four: Better Than One
Part Five: Ātman
Part Six: Only
Part Seven: Two To Tango
Part Eight: Sonnets To A Dark Lady
Part Nine: The Forgotten Tide





Part Ten: Fifth Symphony in Ood Minor


He supposes he shouldn’t be surprised when Donna takes them here, of all places, but it doesn’t change the fact that he is - surprised, that is - at her choice of destination. Surprised, and just a bit unsettled.

The Ood-Sphere isn’t much different than before, barring the lack of containment facilities and the advent of great, towering Ood-Domes that break the sprawling winter of their planet in perfect symmetry, lining the landscape with an admirably stunning sort of geometric precision. He breathes deeply, surveying the sight of countless Ood-kind, young and old, living in peace and prosperity, unfettered and free; the sharp burn of the frigid air against his lungs is tempered pleasantly by the warmth in his chest at realizing that he’d had a part in making this possible; that he’d helped to secure a future for these peaceful creatures. He’d done that.

Him and his Donna.

She’s a natural with the children, Donna; she’s huddled into the very same parka from their last visit, buried knee-deep in snow as she catches the tiny Ood who are singing to her, circling her playfully and diving at her in turn - the game doesn’t seem to have much of a point, really, but he’s not sure it matters much; the pure joy on her face as she laughs, as the Ood seem to laugh along with her, carefree and jubilant, make his hearts soar in a way he hasn’t quite felt in decades, and it’s like a free-fall - invigorating and exhilarating and utterly terrifying all at once. They all seem to love her, the small Ood, but there’s one in particular that takes to her more strongly than the others; Ood Sigma’s young offspring, Ood Theta Sigma.

He knows that Donna doesn’t remember his real name anymore, if she ever really knew it to begin with - she’d never mentioned it, and it was one thing he made certain to take when he erased his memories from her mind. She had said she’d wanted to know him, on his own terms. Therefore, if she was going to learn such an intimate secret, known to so few living souls, he was going to tell her himself.

The Doctor can’t help but think it’s too much of a coincidence.

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Donna can’t quite justify what it is about the miniature Ood that makes them so exquisite to her mind, but she adores them, every single one of them. She remembers the Library, and what it felt like to be a mother, and that rush of maternal affection floods her again in a much more real way as the small children leap towards her arms and she catches them, safe and warm in her grasp before letting them sink into the mounds of powdery snow as they shake with giggles, and their parents watch contentedly, their song pleasant and soothing in her mind as they observe from a distance.

The children tire after some time, their exuberance fading slightly after a while, even as they fight their heavy eyelids, and Donna can’t help but admit that she’s a bit knackered herself. She smiles softly when one of the adult Ood approaches and herds the younglings back towards their families; she recognizes him by his soft eyes and the feel of his presence before she notices the telling letter sigma embroidered on his tunic. He nods her way as he nudges his son, Theta Sigma, back towards the taller Ood that Donna assumes to be his mother. “Your song ended,” he speaks with a deferential nod, his voice low and soothing as ever.

Donna smiles softly, thinking of how ominous his words had sounded before; wondering if he’d always known the truth of them, that this would be her path. “I suppose it did, in a way,” she admits, her cheeks bright with the whipping wind as she flinches against a particular gust; Ood Sigma shuffles his feet a bit to stand between her and the torrent, blocking the chill.

“And a new one began,” he intones, his eyes smiling as he watches her carefully.

Donna grins, her gaze flitting over the children to their side, clutching at the legs of their parents, huddling into them. “Many new ones,” she says, inclining her head towards the new generations of Ood; Ood Sigma follows her nod and bows his head slowly, gratefully in response.

“We are indebted to you,” he tells her solemnly, so filled with reverence that it makes her stomach flutter. “Forevermore.”

“Don’t be silly,” Donna shakes her head and flips her wrist in dismissal. “We only wanted to help.”

Ood Sigma nods slowly, and Donna can tell that the subject would drop, but not rest. “We spoke only truth,” he picks up again, his eyes steady as they watch her. “You will never be forgotten.”

Donna can’t quite meet his gaze as she recalls the circumstances of her previous visit to the Ood-Sphere, tears threatening as she remembers their captivity, their suffering. “Thank you,” she whispers brokenly, trying to reign her emotions.

“You will have a new song, now,” Ood Sigma assures her, his tone strong and certain. “A song all your own.”

Donna scrunches up her face, eyeing him cautiously as the sun begins to shine brighter, squinting at him through the rays. “How d’you mean?”

Ood Sigma doesn’t expand on his observation; not that Donna much expects him to. Instead, he simply tells her with conviction, with something close to serenity: “Be a song, Doctor Donna. A Song.”

“A song?” she asks in utter confusion, trying to determine what exactly the Ood is telling her.

“A long and winding song that never fades,” Ood Sigma reveals cryptically, the ever-present hymn his people growing louder in the background as he turns to walk away, adding before he returns to his family one last thought, infused with such gravity, such weight, that it makes Donna nervous; “Be a song, like the river.”

It feels more like an omen than a prophecy, in the end; and she just knows there’s something she’s missing.


Part Eleven: Ragnarök
 
 
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( 29 comments — Post a new comment )
Jennifer[info]time_converges on August 18th, 2008 02:19 pm (UTC)
Ooh, I was so happy to see a new part! Love this - especially Donna with the Ood babies. Can't wait to see where this is going! :)
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I had this image of baby Ood in my head and I couldn't ignore it; they were too cute! Hope you continue to enjoy what's to come :)
skatergurljb: Tardis-quit you[info]skatergurljb on August 18th, 2008 02:21 pm (UTC)
Wow
Oh, that was just, precious. I actually was as surprised as the Doctor when they plooped down on the Ood planet. What a wonderful adedition! The story deepens in a way I didn't expect, yet nudges the story right along.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:06 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
Goodness... thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed this bit, and I hope that the story "deepening" does keep working for you in the end. Thanks again!
Greenery For The Win![info]doctor_boo on August 18th, 2008 02:24 pm (UTC)
\o/ at cryptic Ood Sigma-I have theories running through my head now!! Another brilliant chapter, Donna and her maternal instincts, made me feel all funny inside :)
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:07 pm (UTC)
Theories; do you like having theories? I hope so :) Thank you; I'm quite glad you enjoyed this.
rude & ginger: Dr. Who - Friends of the Ood[info]dana_cz on August 18th, 2008 02:26 pm (UTC)
Wheeeeeeeeeeeee! Foreshadowing!!! River Song by any chance? If so, I'm curious what will happen next. :D And I believe this warrants my posting. In a bit. ;)

And I do want more! *nod*
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:08 pm (UTC)
You know I loved what you posted as well, so thank you! And I am glad that you enjoyed this (and as for the foreshadowing... perhaps... but maybe not in the way one might expect) More to come!
rude & ginger: David/Catherine - mine[info]dana_cz on August 24th, 2008 04:03 pm (UTC)
We're gonna get the 11th soon, yes? Yes yes yes yes yes? Please?
hitlikehammers[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 04:16 pm (UTC)
If soon is now, then soon is yes :)
shining moment[info]shining_moment on August 18th, 2008 02:27 pm (UTC)
Now, the first thing that popped into my head was that River Song is Donna and the Doctor’s daughter but surely I’m way, way off with that one, right??!!

Another gorgeous chapter, so beautifully written that I could picture Donna playing with the Ood babies while the Doctor looked on. *sigh*
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:09 pm (UTC)
River Song as their daughter, eh? Close, but not quite :)

I am utterly thrilled that you're continuing to enjoy this, really and truly. I cannot thank you enough for your kind words and support.
Kayla: you are bonkers[info]sonicgirl2005 on August 18th, 2008 02:28 pm (UTC)
*raises hand*

Foreshadowing, I sees it. I think. But I'll keep it to myself, lol.


Very nice chapter. Wish it was longer, but very good. Can't wait for another installment! :D
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you; I also wanted it to be longer, but it didn't seem right when I attempted to nudge it further. Glad you're still enjoying, and I truly hope that you continue to.
Caroline: donna awesome[info]welshred on August 18th, 2008 02:44 pm (UTC)
Ooohh what links Donna and River?! Another gorgeous chapter. I love maternal Donna.

hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you! And yes; what does link them, indeed? Hmm...

And a sidenote - I love maternal Donna, too :)
She that is Me: YAY![info]sweetsyren on August 18th, 2008 03:55 pm (UTC)
*fidgits and waits for the next part*

I luff this so much....I can't wait to see what happens next. Foreshadowing FTW!
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:25 pm (UTC)
I am so glad that you're enjoying this, thank you so much! More to come soon!
Roberta: Doctor Who[info]robi_travels on August 19th, 2008 01:55 am (UTC)
Thank you. Loved it. Looking forward to more.

hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you; I am so pleased you're enjoying it.
born for a purpose: world beating team[info]_borntolose on August 19th, 2008 03:11 pm (UTC)
oh this is wonderful! I really really love it and can't wait to see more xxx
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you ever so much; I am thrilled you're liking it thus far, and hope you continue to! More soon!
Token Geek Girl: WTF Girl[info]syreene on August 20th, 2008 03:21 pm (UTC)
Be a song, like the river
Of course, I can't help but think of River Song, now...what with that phrase, the mention of the Library, the whole thing about "Theta," etc. ^_^

Lovely as ever with this story... keep up the great work!
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:27 pm (UTC)
Re: Be a song, like the river
Yes; River Song, indeed :) And thank you, truly - I am so glad you're enjoying this.
I'm only looking at you: pic#78552196[info]nschick on August 22nd, 2008 11:07 pm (UTC)
I'm ... I'm ... speechless. I'm lost for words. That was so SWEET and intense! Oh, I love this story so much, it’s more than Fantastic. A bloody marvel!!! *bounces* I’m getting the river song bit but why? How? OMFG I’m gonna pop with the need and excitement. Please continue it as soon as possible *hugs*
hitlikehammers: doctor donna[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 02:30 pm (UTC)
Speechless? Is that a good kind of speechless? And don't pop! (though I am more than flattered by the excitement) - unfortunately, the connection won't be dealt with until somewhere close to the very end (which is now closer to Part 40... this thing is a beast); but yes, more coming soon (hopefully tonight, as classes resume tomorrow and I don't know what posting will look like after that with my new job on top of my old one and my course load...) But yes - thank you so, so, so much, as always. *hugs*
rude & ginger: Dr. Who - Donna open mouth[info]dana_cz on August 24th, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC)
Sorry to butt in...but 40? Seriously? OMG

*SQUEEEEEE*
hitlikehammers[info]hitlikehammers on August 24th, 2008 04:18 pm (UTC)
Is that a good OMG? *bangs head on keyboard* Seriously, this story has grown to monstrous proportions. It was only meant to be around seven chapters in the beginning. Really.
rude & ginger: Dr. Who - Donna open mouth[info]dana_cz on August 24th, 2008 04:21 pm (UTC)
That's a certainly good OMG! I love a long story especially if it's written as good as this is. And there's UST. *wink* *bounces off to read next chapter*
 
 

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